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As mentioned previously, ChatGPT and other artificial intelligence content generators (Claude, Gemini, Jasper, etc.) are a tempting resource for students faced with writing dozens of college essays. Running a prompt through AI will yield an essay that seems well-written and better organized than most students can produce... that is, unless you try to figure out what it actually means or try to connect with the writing on an emotional level.
AI uses patterns to generate content, creating a buzzword-heavy, superficial writing style. When a student inputs a college admissions prompt, AI will use millions of examples to generate its contentâbut it wonât generate anything new. When our main goal is to help our students stand out by demonstrating their potential for success, working from a pattern is exactly what we donât want students to do!
We have put together the following list (with a special shout-out to one of our mentors, Margot) to help you identify AI in essays. The goal with this list is to help you identify potential AI content early on so you donât accidentally affirm AI-written content as good writing or realize you need to change something in a later draft that you or a previous coach praised. Â
Note: None of these flags are sufficient to prove an essay was created with generative AI on its own. Remember, AI is trained on other essays, so it mimics those same mistakes! But when a number of these things are present, or if youâre getting a general vibe, this list can help you narrow down whether itâs a studentâs somewhat generic writing or generative AI.
When reviewing essays, look for a combination of the following flags.
- Does the essay have a title? Most students donât include titles in their CAPS, since they count toward their overall word count. (The one exception is if they wrote it as an assignment for an English class, in which case it often includes the studentâs name, the date, etc.) AI-generated essays sometimes include titles that relate to the larger metaphor or larger message the student is trying to communicate (and potentially prompted the AI with).
- For example, one AI-generated essay we saw was about a student on a swim team titled âThe Ripple I Want To Leave Behind.â Another was about a fatherâs cancer diagnosis and was simply called âLiving With Uncertainty.â
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- Em dashes: Who doesnât love an em dash? Lots of people do, and it doesnât necessarily mean that something is AI-generated! But an abundance of em dashes, combined with lists of three (more on that below!) or overly elevated/trite vocabulary, can serve as an extra piece of evidence that something might be AI-generated.
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- Overly Structured Writing: AI tends to produce essays with clear, clean paragraph transitions that follow expected narrative arcs. There is usually a pat, predictable formula - the student encountered X difficulty, then realized Y, then presents a list of ways theyâve now changed to be more Z. Real student essays often have one section thatâs overinflated, another thatâs too skimpy - but youâll get the sense that they care about certain details or parts of the story. AI will be balanced but will lack the emotional connection, and itâs often hard to follow the arc of studentsâ growth. Suddenly, âeverything shiftsâ, â their âperspective changedâ, they ârealized it wasnât about ______, but __________ â without explaining what sparked that realization or how Section 1 of the essay led to the specific takeaways or growth that they go on to discuss in Section 3.
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- Polished Language and Vocabulary: The writing may use sophisticated phrasing that feels out of step with a typical high school student's voice.
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- Common Sentence Structures: AI loves to use lists of threes - everything has three components, or three factors, or three descriptors! Just seeing one list of three shouldnât necessarily make you suspicious. However, when that triplet structure repeats two or three times per paragraph, or if all three things in the list have very similar, almost identical meanings that donât give the reader new insight or new details, it should give you pause.
- Another common structure is the âitâs not only _________, but also _________â formatting! This is a clunkier construction thatâs often easy to cut entirely because it clutters up the word count without giving new insight into how the second detail is different from the first one. Youâll also see âWhat started as ____________ then became ___________â, which runs into similar issues as using common narrative arcs - the student will show you A and Z and completely leave out the middle details that explain how this situation transformed from one thing to another.
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- Generic or Broad Reflections: Conclusions often feel universally applicable (e.g., âI learned to persevere,â âthe experience shaped my growth,â âI realized the value of teamwork,â etc.) rather than personal, and sometimes they arenât even appropriate for the theme of the essay.
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- Lack of Unique Details: Specific moments, dialogue, or idiosyncratic observations are often missing, which are hallmarks of human writing.
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- Conversations/Discussions/Curiosities: A lack of detail often really stands out when students write about having conversations with friends or family; thereâs never any description of the content - itâs all just generally speaking up, joking, conspiring, bonding, etc., with no specifics.
- Last year, we noticed a number of essays discussing important relationships where a key factor was the ability to talk to a person about anything, but no mention of what âanythingâ was in this situation.
- When students write about participating more in classroom conversations, AI essays donât provide any details but often mention things like, âI was no longer chasing correct answers but wrestling with difficult questions.â But there is no context about what those questions are, or even sometimes what subject theyâre wrestling with.
- When it comes to communicating or collaborating in larger groups or clubs, AI essays often discuss listening carefully and ensuring everyoneâs voice is heard, learning to find consensus or value everyoneâs input, and building bridges between people with separate viewpoints. But, again, there are no specifics of what different perspectives they were having to balance, what they were listening to, or how they made sure everyone felt heard.Â
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- Even Tone Throughout: Essays may lack emotional highs, lows, or imperfections, creating a smooth but artificial flow.
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Resources for Spotting AI-Generated Text
- Here is an example of an AI-generated essay with a key to help you find the patterns and buzzwords.
- Here is a list of patterns and buzzwords commonly used in essays written with AI.
Examples of AI-Influenced Content (click the arrow to expand)
Buzzwords/phrases that sound good, appropriate even for a college essay, but often arenât tied to the actual context of that section
- âThe lessons I learnedâ (with no named lesson)
- âTranscendsâ (with no contrast of something transcending something else)
- âTransformativeâ (with no action that shows a change)
- âTestamentâ
- "My journey of discovery" or "a journey toward impact"
- âTapestry of diversityâ
Scrabble words
- âMyriadâ
- âEnigmaâ
- âFormidableâ
- âSymbolic significanceâ
Vague claims with zero evidence
- âThis openness has deepened my connections with individuals from all walks of life, allowing me to forge bonds built on empathy and understanding.â
- âI found that keeping an open mind during these exchanges illuminated the power of diverse perspectives.â
- âI have since forged friendships with individuals from different continents, each bond a testament to the enduring impact of genuine cross-cultural understanding.â
- âRPI is unlike other universities that may force me to adjust my aspirations to fit a set path."
- âThe kitchen, once a realm of mystery, became a place of shared experiences and valuable life skills.â
- âThis awareness has helped me foster a more inclusive perspective in my interactions, celebrating the richness of cultural diversity.â
Some phrases just donât sound human
- âI am grateful for the wisdom gleaned from a childhood ceremony that propels me forward.â
- âThis university beckons meâŚâ
- âI admire how Dr. So & So utilizes computational methods to decipher the enigmas of biomolecules.â
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- Abrupt shifts in tone between paragraphs
- An overabundance of summarizing statements
- Clunky adjective-noun and adverb-verb pairingsâand an overreliance on these pairings
- A general lack of emotion or depth paired with familiar/expected takeaways
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Supplement Specific Flags
Below are a few things to look out for when reviewing supplement essays.
- Leadership Essays: Generative AI loves to describe things as quiet, and one of the most noticeable areas where this turns up is in essays about leadership. A frequent takeaway AI includes in these essays is that leadership isnât about being the loudest one in the crowd, the one with the megaphone, the one in the spotlight, the one calling all the shots, but is about a quiet kind of dignity (that often appears to simply be participating in the activity).
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- Why Us/Why Major Essays: The differences between a student-written, very generic Why Us or Why Major essay and an AI-generated one are a little difficult to spot, since the general language and sweeping statements about the greatness of the school are very common! One thing to watch out for is that a student who has used AI to write a Why Us/Why Major essay and is trying to prompt it to be more specific often ends up with references that donât sound accurate.
- For example, referring to a computer science internship that actually just sounds like a job posting, or a research lab or course with material so advanced that itâs only for graduate students, or discussing majors for a school that calls them concentrations, etc. Itâs not necessary to Google every reference a student includes in a Why School essay, but if there are a number of them that sound off, or ones you know from your personal experience arenât accurate, it may be worth asking more questions.
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- Describe an Activity Essay: The biggest red flag for AI-influenced essays about this topic is that it will be hard to understand what exactly the student did in the activity. For instance, there is a description of a club whose goal is to spread awareness of mental health issues, but you never figure out how this awareness is spread or what they do in the club to spread that message. Similarly, itâs hard to tell how the student feels about the activity - do they care about it at all, or have any parts of it that are meaningful to them? (This, of course, is definitely not an AI-only issue, but is really noticeable in AI-generated responses!)
âŹď¸Â Take a look at the following Why Us? essays, one written by AI, the other by a student:
AI-generated:
As a high school senior eagerly planning my next academic chapter, I find myself drawn to the University of Illinois for a myriad of compelling reasons. This esteemed institution, nestled in the heart of the Midwest, embodies the perfect blend of academic excellence, a vibrant community, and a commitment to fostering diversity and inclusivity.The University of Illinoisâ reputation for cutting-edge research and innovative learning opportunities aligns perfectly with my desire to challenge myself and contribute to meaningful discoveries. Whether itâs collaborating with faculty on groundbreaking projects, accessing state-of-the-art resources, or diving into interdisciplinary coursework, I am excited to immerse myself in an environment that prioritizes both intellectual growth and real-world impact.Beyond academics, the universityâs vibrant campus culture promises a community where I can grow not just as a student, but as a person. From its diverse student body to its wealth of extracurricular opportunitiesâwhether joining student-led organizations, participating in cultural events, or volunteering through community outreach programsâI see the University of Illinois as a place where I can build lasting relationships, learn from different perspectives, and contribute meaningfully to campus life.
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Written by student:
Looking forward to my next academic chapter, I am enthused to pursue a degree in the School of Media and Cinema Studies at the University of Illinois for a plethora of reasons. I'm invested in the Midwestern values that the UIUC community offers, especially considering that you have the most students of color among top-ranked Midwest universities.Looking forward to my next academic chapter, I am enthused to pursue a degree in the School of Media and Cinema Studies at the University of Illinois for a plethora of reasons. I'm invested in the Midwestern values that the UIUC community offers, especially considering that you have the most students of color among top-ranked Midwest universities.I am eager to participate in opportunities for mentorship and to also build community through programs like SEEDS. As a first-generation student, I know this community will be an invaluable support to me, and someday, I hope to become a mentor myself.I have created many films as a budding filmmaker, but I have had limited resources. At the University of Illinois, I know I won't be looked down upon because of classes like Smart Phone Cinema and Popular Culture MACS 320. Of course, I'm also excited to start using professional tools in the cutting-edge studios and to work with professors who are also experts in the field and will teach me all of the skills I need to be a successful filmmaker!
There are a lot of similarities here, with generalizations and a lot of extra wording that could be condensed to make room for more specific research and personality. Still, we at least see a few entry points in the student-written draft to build fromâand our feedback would make this essay more precise and personal in no time!
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